Dr. Louis A
HUC 130
April 29, 2010
What television doing to the young minds
Action! Action! Read all about it, A 15 year old boy named Michel Brewr was light on fire intentionally by an argument over his father bike. Three suspects are minder form the age of fifteen and thirteen. This accident happen South Florida, Miami in October 13, 2009. Michael Brewr is an adverted kid. He loves to scat, play video games and hangout with his friends. Sixty-five to eighty present of his body get burned. How did a teen would come up with this idea to use flammable liquid and set a young boy on fire? (“Attempted murder charge after teen is set on fire”)
Who else to blame with this catastrophe going on the media/television or parents? In my opinion, I highly believe it is the media/television. When I was growing up television wasn’t the way it is now, time has change. Television promotes anything from violence to real life stories, you call you name it. They had family show that family could relate to. For example: Full house, Family Menders, and Growing pain. These shows were none violent and helpful young view. One of the earliest known teenage female killers wasn’t even a teenager. Mary Bell strangled a three-year old boy and four-year old boy as well just because of kicks in 1968 at the tender age of 11.
Television has many efforts on child. Children don’t understand the meaning between rights from wrong until the person whom supervises them would teach it to them. In my opinion, it is not right televising violent programs while children are still awake. Violent shows are bad not only to children but also to society. People who watch violent television shows want to imitate the television life. For example: action movies and cartoon programs affects our children negatively. Parents who have children need to restrict their viewing of violent television show and need to start with reality show.
A most resist accident that requires, a 15 year Josie Ratley was severely beaten after texting Wayne Treacy age 15 making a remake about his older brother recent suicide. Joise was beaten so badly that she in a coma for three weeks. Wayne Treacy allegedly punched her, kick and stomped her head with steel toe boots. The worst thing about this incident were a young girl age 13 name Kayla Manson knew what Treacy was about to go do to Josie but did nothing to help. Where did a 15 year-old learn how to do these things? This incident happened in South Florida. (“Fla. Teen Beating Victim Coming out of Coma”).
Work Cited
“Attempted murder charge after teen is set on fire” WCCO CBS Broadcasting Inc, http://wcco.com/national/teen.on.fire.2.1244811.html 13 Oct, 2009. 26 Apr, 2010
“Fla. Teen Beating Victim Coming out of Coma” WCCO CBS Broadcasting Inc, htt://wccoo.com/Josie.ratley.teen.21616085.html 6 Apr, 2010. 27 Apr, 2010
I really liked your thesis statement it is different,it really stands out,you have many examples about old school television like i do.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to know if my essay is going on the right task or if I am going off topic.
ReplyDeletei enjoyed reading this, you have a lot of proof how there was less violence on t.v b4 ,
ReplyDeleteyour on the right task. kids being influence by television/media.
you should just get more evidence on how the television influenced these kids to do there murders.